I pledge allegiance to the flag
of the United States of America
and to the Republic
for which it stands
I pledge resistance
to the tyrant
who would sell out our values
to Vladimir Putin
And to the authoritarianism
for which he stands
I pledge active citizenship
aspiring to the ideals
of the Declaration of Independence
and the Constitution of the United States
I pledge to be engaged with my community
and my representatives
and to take responsibility to be
reasonably and factually informed
on those issues and news
which I strive to influence
On gaslighting and ignorance
I will shine a light
to defend the truth
A nation of immigrants
out of many
we are One
I do not care
who is your g(G)od
or where you were born
I pledge my love
to be who you are
Indivisible
We stand together
to celebrate diversity
and prove that
Love trumps hate
to defend
Justice and Liberty for all
This is the second revision that I’ve come up with. As a massage therapist rather than a poet, my structure is not as disciplined as perhaps it could be. I’m not fully comfortable with the second stanza because, though it expresses an idea that is important in this moment, I feel it diminishes the timelessness of the intention. I’d love your feedback and to read your alternative versions.
The last time the pledge of allegiance was updated was in the 1950’s at the height of the cold war, when we had to show we’d stand up to the godless communists. If you’re like me, perhaps you agree that it doesn’t quite resonate in some ways.
It this moment, I want to express that resistance is patriotic. That freedom of religion, even freedom from religion are part of what makes our country and our founding documents special. That we are a nation of immigrants which opens the American dream to all comers. Acknowledging darkness in our history helps us face and correct it, amplifying the strength of who we are rather than diminishing it.
That we could elect an African-American man with the name Barack Hussein Obama makes us special.
Khizr, Ghazala, and Captain Humayun Khan and their sacrifice make us special.
Muhammad Ali, the boxing legend and civil rights icon makes us special.
The American story of colony, rebellion, independence and expansion to world power is unique. We have our stories of inspiration. We have stories of shame. We are flawed. Yet in our flaws we are still great.
So for a someone to run and win any position of national leadership on a campaign of “Make America Great Again” is offensive because of the implication that at some point we lost our greatness.
Reverence, love, pride, history. Opposition to white, Christian nationalism.
These thoughts, feelings and more I wanted to express in an updated pledge. What would you emphasize?
A few miscellaneous references and resources for activism.
Chris Reeves Nuts & Bolts Guide
Indivisible Guide
Resistance Manual
Women’s March
Our Revolution
Brand New Congress
Some Experts Say Trump Team’s Falsehoods Are Classic ‘Gaslighting’
Wikipedia entry on the Pledge of Allegiance
via the National Archives, America’s Founding Documents
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