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  •  If I were an editor, (2+ / 0-)
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    Catte Nappe, erush1345

    I would be editing.

    A suggestion, for example: change "psycho ward" to "psych ward". The former is on a par with "looney bin" and other derogatory ways of describing inpatient psychiatric care. The latter is neutral.

    As others have noted... you tend to be abrasive in your writing. Not that I can really judge you for that, I can be incredibly abrasive. But, you know, it's not a good way to make friends and influence people, unless you want to influence them to reflexively disagree with you.

    "But there's one thing that gives every Marine the willies, and anyone saying otherwise is a liar. Drop pods. That shit is terrifying, son."

    by Shaviv on Mon Dec 12, 2011 at 02:58:53 PM PST

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