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    sorry I couldn't comment on everybody's critique, but I had to fix dinner for my daughter and then take care of the kitchen. I didn't fully appreciate all my late wife did until I had to do it.

    I tend to run on is what I think most of you are saying, and tightening up the text should be easy now.
    Again I am deeply in everyone's debt for teaching me the lost art of conciseness.

    -9.75, -7.49 "He that will not reason is a bigot - He that cannot reason is a fool - He that dares not reason is a slave." Sir William Drummond 1585-1649

    by zamrzla on Fri Jul 06, 2012 at 05:19:32 PM PDT

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