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  •  Too bad about that . . . (0+ / 0-)

    NMLib -- sorry about the danger of wasting all that time, so you feel it necessary to post your 'research' on line.  Why?  How
    about OUR time?  You have very little to say that is not known,
    and your writing needs cutting and editing in the extreme. It is so repetitious! How many times did you refer to "senator from Massachusetts?"  About three more than needed.  Etc.
       Re-read it; see if you can't make it tighter, all said in 25% fewer words. I am all for you, but you need to learn to write.
    An Old Schoolteacher in NM!
    ps:  So that you time wont be wasted is NO reason to publish anything -- did you not learn in English classes that all writing is for the reader?  You publish because your work might interest or benefit the reader, and if you keep that sharply in mind your writing will improve a lot.  Good luck!

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