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  •  Yeah, I probably would agree with (4+ / 0-)
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    your critics. But not necessarily want to see how they fight their way out, but that they actually do fight their way out.

    You know: a couple of paragraphs of them in a pub (a few days or a week later, maybe?), planning their next adventure. That would do it for me, b/c I can see

    She enters the fray grinning, because the pair of them are fighting together.
    and I think it's strong, but what's missing is your denouement.

    Irony takes a worse beating from Republicans than Wile E. Coyote does from Acme. --Tara the Antisocial Social Worker

    by Youffraita on Thu Jun 06, 2013 at 10:05:33 PM PDT

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