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View Diary: Lengthy Analysis of Bush's 6/28/05 Speech (77 comments)

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  •  Way to go (none)
    This was an excellent article and all you can say is it was to long?  Well then, let me make this brief: Fuck You.

    I'm a hustler, baby. I'm a shining star!

    by buttermyself on Wed Jun 29, 2005 at 09:10:28 AM PDT

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    •  Harsh, but (none)
      I more or less agree.  No one said you have to read it.  

      Our side is more thoughtful and intellectual.  That's a strength, not a weakness.  

      The Republican Party: Redefining Oppression for the 21st Century

      by daveriegel on Wed Jun 29, 2005 at 10:31:59 AM PDT

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      •  Like I said (none)
        I asked what is the diarists intended audience? I am no one to talk given the speed with which I write my posts, but if I want to do something beyond a simple chat,  I think about how I am writing because form counts as much as what I am writing. Again, let me repeat, it depends on what this person wants to do with this because I sensed in their own statements a desire to reach a wider audience than D Kos. If his/her purpose is to analyze the situation for just D Kos, then it's fine the way it is. If not, then succint writing would be the preferred choice. That's my point in a nutshell. So, what exactly is the problem with this position?
    •  As I said - who is this for? (none)
      If it is for yourself- fine- but if you are wanting to convince others then yes form matters as much as substance.

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