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View Diary: My climate change letter botched and butchered by our conservative newspaper in Chattanooga (115 comments)

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  •  unfortunately they can and will do this all the (7+ / 0-)

    time in LTEs....  

    Try to make them really compact and take out wording that might be used to weaken your point.  Ultimately, at least they kept your main intent in--even if they stripped the science behind it.   What I would lose is this phrase:

    "Whether or not some people beleve it'.  A bit extraneous, and it can be used to temper your point.

    If they had started at 'We need to...', there's your money point right there.

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