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  •  Please consider (none / 0)

    writing a diary on that with some good examples.
    •  there was a (none / 0)

      really good one on the DFA forum sometime back on Camp Casey. The forum is now closed, so i can't go back to find the links. i'll keep track if and when I come across such instances again.
    •  Found it! (none / 0)

      On Aug 20/21, 2005, there were two news articles appeared one at CNN and another on WaPo with a few hours separating them (links no longer work; more on it below):

      1. CNN. Bush supporters create opposing camp
      'Fort Qualls' built in Crawford to counter protesters' 'Camp Casey'
      Saturday, August 20, 2005; Posted: 10:42 p.m. EDT (02:42 GMT). Link

      2. War Backers Set Up Camp Near Bush Ranch
      By ANGELA K. BROWN
      The Associated Press
      Sunday, August 21, 2005; 2:57 AM
      CRAWFORD, Texas --. Link.

      ~~~~~~~~

      Here's how they differed (lines starting with "<" from CNN and ones starting with ">" from WaPo):

      ~~~~~~~~~~~~

      1,3c1,5
      < Bush supporters create opposing camp
      < 'Fort Qualls' built in Crawford to counter protesters' 'Camp Casey'
      < Saturday, August 20, 2005; Posted: 10:42 p.m. EDT (02:42 GMT)
      ---
      > War Backers Set Up Camp Near Bush Ranch
      > By ANGELA K. BROWN
      > The Associated Press
      > Sunday, August 21, 2005; 2:57 AM
      > CRAWFORD, Texas --

      {NL: Note the Wapo version appeared some 4 hrs after the first one did}

      ~~~~~~~~~~~~

      5c7
      < A pro-Bush camp with a "God Bless Our President!" banner sprung up downtown
      ---
      > A patriotic camp with a "God Bless Our President!" banner sprung up downtown

      {NL: Need I say more? :)}

      ~~~~~~~~~~~~

      26,28c28,30
      < year in Iraq, started the anti-war demonstration along the roadside on
      < August 6. "Camp Casey" has since grown to about 100 core participants, and
      < hundreds more from across the nation have visited.
      ---
      > year in Iraq, started the anti-war demonstration along the roadside on Aug.
      > 6. "Camp Casey" has since grown to about 100 core participants, and hundreds
      > more from across the nation have visited.

      {NL: minor edit}

      ~~~~~~~~~~~~

      31,34c33,36
      < his five-week-long vacation ended, but she flew to Los Angeles last week
      < after her 74-year-old mother had a stroke. Her mother has some paralysis but
      < is in good spirits, and if she improves, Sheehan might return to Texas in a
      < few days, some demonstrators said. (Full story)
      ---
      > his monthlong vacation ended, but she flew to Los Angeles last week after
      > her 74-year-old mother had a stroke. Her mother has some paralysis but is in
      > good spirits, and if she improves, Sheehan may return to Texas in a few
      > days, some demonstrators said.

      {NL: month is shorter than 5 weeks, Preznit Chimpenero is work haaard..}

      ~~~~~~~~~~~~

      36c38
      < In her absence the rest of the group will keep camping out for the unlikely
      ---
      > In her absence, the rest of the group will keep camping out for the unlikely

      {NL: The massager knows his/her grammar}

      ~~~~~~~~~~~~

      45,46c47,48
      < she arrived. Since then, a few Bush supporters have stood in the sun holding
      < signs for several hours each day.
      ---
      > she arrived, and since then, a few Bush supporters have stood in the sun
      > holding signs for several hours each day.

      {NL: he knows how to combine sentences too}

      ~~~~~~~~~~~~

      56c58
      < Peace, co-founded by Sheehan and made up of relatives of fallen soldiers,
      ---
      > Peace, co-founded by Sheehan and comprised of relatives of fallen soldiers,

      {NL: finally the dude is showing off improved vocabulary here. Nice}

      ~~~~~~~~~~~~
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      Links:

      The original CNN/WaPo links don't work any more, but here are copies as of now:

      Maybe someone that knows how google cache works can dig up cached copies of the original source articles.

      This news-twisting nexus appears to include AP, ABC News, Fox, WaPo (and perhaps WSJ) from these and other similar instances.

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