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View Diary: UPDATE 2: REVISED AD - Kick `em while they're down with one, final, simple ad (299 comments)

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  •  This is a good approach (1+ / 0-)
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    Jesterfox

    However, it's generally better to put the ellipses after a few "I believe" sentences, once you've established the rhythm. Keep the beginning the same as Bob's, then use your quick cut technique afterwards.

    BTW, how would we ever get this thing actually produced?

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