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  •  Brevity is your friend. (0+ / 0-)

    I couldn't get through the article to figure out what it was you wanted from me.  If you're going to be visible in print (which is an EXCELLENT idea) you should get yourself The Elements of Style or learn the basics of a press release.

    At minimum you want to state your case, the whole, but very short case, and THEN spell out the details and why the guy you're replacing is a shmuck.

    For instance, I don't want your money, I want substantive IDEAS.  And here's why ... blah blah... and here's how .... and here's what you'll get for it.... And finally, here's where you can send me a donation.

    Best of luck to you.  I also have a tendency toward the verbose, so I feel your pain.

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