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  •  Exactly. Slopping wording in the ad. Change it! (1+ / 0-)
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    MKSinSA

    As a former copy editor for a newspaper, I would have automatically slashed the word "passed" -- one person does not ever "pass" any legislation. "I passed laws" is, frankly, cringe-worthy.
    This ad needs some editing ASAP.
    And they urgently need to tighten up the review process for their ads.

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