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View Diary: For Immediate Release: The Jeff Gannon Controversy - A Primer for the Press (436 comments)

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  •  One more thing.... (4.00)
    In the last paragraph, change it to:

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    •  Great button Newsie (none)
      do you think the last paragraph should mention "this is an ongoing investigation" so they know there is a lot more to come..??

      educate 'em when they're young

      by Chamonix on Thu Feb 10, 2005 at 08:52:11 PM PST

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    •  Great but... (none)
      ..the word "rants" is a bloggers term. It has very negative connotations in every day English usage.

      I think we should remember who our audience is for the press releases.

      Frankly, I am in awe at the great work being done and don't really want to make any form of criticism.

      •  My thoughts (none)
        also...

        For future reference:  Strip out words that indicate bias or connotation... stick, to quote the Strunk and White cliche, to nouns and verbs.

        Very important.

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