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I need the Daily Kos corp of genius to tell me what is and what isn't wrong with my four blogs. You have time to read them. I know you do. It's my feeble attempt at satire. I know some people won't understand the points of the articles, but you guys will.

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  •  Ecclesiacatstes 1 (4+ / 0-)
    Everything Iz st00pid

    1 Teh werdz ov teh preechur, teh son ov David, King of teh Jerusalem.2 "St00pid! St00pid!" Sez teh teechurcat. "Srsly st00pid. Everythingz st00pid."3 Wut man getz 4 laburz he toilz @ undur teh sunz?4 Generashun comez n generashun goez, still same lolcats.5 Sun rizez n setz, goez bak n rize agin.6 Teh wind blowz souf n norf, rownd n rownd, alwayz teh sayme.7 Seaz can has streemz, nevur fullz. Streemz go bak where comez frum.8 All tingz has DO NOT WANT, more den werdz sez. Lolrus never sez "enuf bucket, kthnx" or kitteh sez "dats good, enuff cheezburger."9 Has happen? Gunna be agin. Nuthing new undur teh sunz.10 Kitteh can not sez "OMFGZ sumthing new!" is jus REPOST!.11 New kittahz 4gitz old kittahz, new kittahz 4gitd bai even newer kittahz.
    Wizdum Iz St00pid

    12 I Iz teh teechurcat, king of teh Jerusalem.13 I has studiez n wizdum ovur all lolcatz, n zomg wut hevy berdun Ceiling Cat putz on kittehz.14 Teechurcat haz see lolrus n cheezburgerz n longcatz n awl dat is st00pidz, lyke chasing aftur tail. Nevr can catch teh tayle and even whn yu doo it hrtz srsly.

    15 Wut iz breakd kittah cannot to be fixez, wut gon cannot iz cowntid.

    16 Teechurcat sez to selv, "O hai! I has growd n increes widum moar den awl teechurcatz comez b4 meh. I has ekspeeriens much wizdum n nawledg."17 Den I appliez self to knowz wizdomz n aslo knowz bout craze and g00f, n lernz dat dis aslo lyke chasing aftur tayl.

    18 Srsly moar wizdum iz FTL, k. Moar smartz, moar greefz.

  •  I did not read all four. (2+ / 0-)
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    JoanMar, whaddaya

    I read one. You have funny ideas. I see glimmers of gold. Edit.  Use fewer words. Write more.  And keep writing.  

    I used to be Snow White. And then I drifted. - Mae West

    by CherryTheTart on Tue Nov 20, 2012 at 09:16:04 PM PST

  •  Then Post It Here nt (4+ / 0-)

    We are called to speak for the weak, for the voiceless, for victims of our nation and for those it calls enemy.... --ML King "Beyond Vietnam"

    by Gooserock on Tue Nov 20, 2012 at 09:25:48 PM PST

  •  While I'm not the best person to ask, I've got (3+ / 0-)
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    linkage, CherryTheTart, JoanMar

    some time on my hands, so what the heck:

    First, I assume what you wanted to say was "blog posts" and not "blogs".  You have one blog and have made four posts...

    Regarding your efforts at satire (based on my long, well-established history as a failed blogger):

    a)  The RIV Bible thing was pretty good, but it relies to a degree on the reader knowing what the more commonly accepted versions of the Bible actually say in those particular passages. You provided the reference so the real passages could be looked up, but it creates work for your reader that could have been fixed with a hyperlink or mouse-over pop-up that would have simplified the comparison (no, I don't know how to do that latter thing).

    2) The "step dad" and "Hitler and me" posts were probably too densely populated with points you wanted to make to be really effective satire.  I get the "step dad" post, but I'm not sure I could ever explain the "Hitler" post and the lines that it appears to cross...

    III) I actually enjoyed that last golfing post; I thought it was kind of cute and amusing.  That looks more like satire than the middle two posts...

    ...or maybe this comment is an example of  the admonition to be careful of what you ask for...

    "In a nation ruled by swine, all pigs are upward mobile..." - Dr. Hunter S. Thompson

    by Jack K on Tue Nov 20, 2012 at 09:37:59 PM PST

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