I'm am a retired married woman, but I had a thought for a "Political Commercial". Maybe it's bad but I want to type it out and see if it reads how I saw it.
Here Goes (first attempt to do this so it's probably wrong!)
Scene 1.- 2 young preppy boys in private school uniform, about 12 (they resemble Romeny Ryan) playing a "shell game". They are cute and smiling- they say "step right up and pick a shell" - Several kids step up, they smile at each other, switch the cups, and (you see the hole in the table and the shell drop off). They slide the cups and open it, ahhh You Picked Wrong.... they smile... the loser kids walk off...wondering...
Scene 2. - 2 Yuppy College Guys (like Trading Places singing in the Private Club!) Resemble Romney Ryan.. They are looking over a list of members (given by one of their uncle's). They decide (they are talking about who they think should not be in the club) they "smile at each other and remove a middle initial, or an "s" on names making some names different" as they laugh it off. The members shows up, they say "uhmm don't see your name" The name is slightly different, the person leaves trying to think about an ID that has that middle name. (They walk away perplexed, laughed at, and looking rejected) Shot of - Yuppy guys laughing..
Last Scene-2 Rich guys pull up in a pricy sport car (older version of the last but still resemble Romney Ryan, they are going to sell a boat. One says to the other, "it's missing some things and we lied about other things" the other says "no problem, it's a cash sale, caveat emptor" as they take the cash and pull away in the sports car laughing. The buyer finds a hole, but it was a "buy as is" so they (cut to a repair guy) saying about $2000.00 repairs. That fail sound.... buyer shakes his head..
Cut to this statement
NO MATTER HOW OLD WE ARE, WE KNOW WHEN WE ARE GETTING RIPPED OFF...
DON'T BE HAD BY THE BOYISH SMILES AND NICE CLOTHES AND EMPTY PROMISES. LIES ARE LIES AND PEOPLE GET HURT.
LET'S STICK WITH WHAT WE HAVE, (Go to list of what Obama Inherited) HE CHANGED ALL OF THIS FOR THE BETTER... HE WILL CONTINUE TO DO THE RIGHT THING IF WE LET HIM.
LET'S NOT GET SCAMMED NOW. (show quick shots of the young boys laughing, the yuppy guys cheering and the older rich guys sneering)
I look at my neighbors that are NOT political junkies (like me) and I know this would work on them. I live in Tennessee. I sure hope this state is not a "give up", just in my little neighborhood (about 55 houses) there are 5 Obama Signs on the lawn.